Monday, 25 June 2012

My story for Poem Dads going to make it to school play tonight!

It was the day a whole year of waiting and finally it was here my school play!! Id counted down all year waiting and waiting for this play! My mums going to be there, my dad and also my little sister but she wont under stand shes only two!
Id waited and waited it felt more special than any thing because all i wanted to do is perform on our tiny little stage in front of my dad! Hes a pilot he flies big planes in the sky and some times goes away for days so he can fly people on their holidays far far away like Mexico,Brazil,America and some times even Australia. But today he was flying all the way from Mexico to see my perform. However i hope he could make it i wouldn't perform if he wasn't there :(

Mean while it was 5 o clock and my show was 2 hrs away from performing, my mum got my costume put it on me and did my hair in a plats i was playing the main part in the wizard of oz! While i was waiting for my mum she shouted me to get in the car so we got there in time. I was sitting in the car whilst the rain was poring down on the shiny car windows. We finally got there and everyone was standing out side waiting for me to arrive all my friends and even my Nanny waving to me! But not my dad.'Whys dad not here?' I yelled
'Not to worry' cried  mum
'Oh no' I mumbled!
We got in the hall and my mum sat down and took her seat on the shiny red chair as bright as a tomato!
She waved me goodbye and chatted to Holly's mum.
'Good luck girls ill save a seat for your dad!' shouted Mum

We got to the back of the stage and saw my drama teacher we waited half a hour and then she told me to get ready as we took our positions! I stood by the red curtain and looked through the tiny hole through the red shimmering curtains and my dad was still not there i got a tickle in my stomach and started to panic! (i just didn't want to do it) Hes not here i stamped my feet.
'Dont worry he will  be here' Cried Miss Potter (drama teacher)
I took my please on stage and said my first lines. My mum looked at me and had a sad face.
I knew he wasn't going to make it he tries so much but Mexico to here how would he make it?
I kept going and make my mum smile. It was 30 mins into the play and i started to feel sad i walked to the side said my lines and waited till he came on!, We were 40 mins in and were singing are 5th  to last song i said  my line and turned my head my dad was sitting on the shiny as tomato chairs looking into my eyes singing along with the song. As if  he knew the words! After it finished i ran and  hugged my dad!
I KNEW HE WOULD MAKE IT!
Rebecca Case story poem :)

1 comment:

  1. Lots of great detail here Rebecca that shows you really know the poem it was based on. Great effort, impressive range of vocabulary =)

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